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Help writting a card

future mrs dashfuture mrs dash member
in October 2014 Moms
So my sil is lets say complicated. She can be very emotional and get angry/upset/stressed about things i would never expect so thats y i need help writting this card. She is having ivf as her husband is quiet a bit older n had the snip many years ago. She started the drug therapy last week and the emotional side effects r definately showing.

I have brought her a hypnotheraphy IVF cd which has one for before implantation n one cd for after to help relax and focus the mind. Im goin to post it to her with a little card but dnt want to offend her as its brought out of genuine heart. I thought mayb:

I hope you enjoy these CDs and they help relax and focus on the exciting journey you are embarking. I have another Cd from this range and they are very relaxing and informative at the same time.
The reviews are very possitive if used regularly so give it a go.




What do u think? (Sorry for the long post) :D
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  • persephonerosepersephonerose member
    I would skip the part about positive reviews, but I think the rest is fine. Keep it simple.
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  • NavyFlyerNavyFlyer member
    persephonerose said:
    I would skip the part about positive reviews, but I think the rest is fine. Keep it simple.
    I was thinking the exact same thing! Cut out that line. 
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  • golfingdarwinfishgolfingdarwinfish member
    edited June 2014
    persephonerose said:
    I would skip the part about positive reviews, but I think the rest is fine. Keep it simple.
    Agree..

    Although, if you're open to suggestions re: grammar.....
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  • MrsSinner402MrsSinner402 member
    edited June 2014
    The overall message is nice. I would, however, use better spelling, punctuation, and grammar when sending.

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  • DreadGamerWifeDreadGamerWife member
    What a nice idea.  Just let her know that you are thinking of them and that if she wants to talk about it, you are ready to listen.  

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  • future mrs dashfuture mrs dash member
    Sorry about the grammer guys, im rubbish at it (as u can tell). Its from not being diagnosed as dyslexic until uni so didnt get any extra help. /' :( sorry
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