Black Out: Chapter Six

Re: Black Out: Chapter Six

• BoopADoopBetty member

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  I'm not ready for the emotion yet.

  "I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."

   

   

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  Or the scary. I'm fragile.

  "I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."

   

   

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• phishgirl29 member

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  Loved it!

                      

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  IM SCARED TO READ IT NOW. I will be yelling at you via text when I do. You better answer me back and comfort me

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  AHH, wtf, Sookie?! god dammit.

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• virgin4lyfe member

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  MIKEYYYY.
  I should probably attempt to prepare for emergency devastation as well but alas our preparedness is blankets, flashlights, soup cans, and a non-electric can opener. We'd survive for a few days I think :P
  

  
  

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  SookieFrackhouse68 said:

  And thus concludes the longest flashback I've written to date.

  
  

  Holy damn. 3.5k words.

  
  Because Micah, my little brainy buddy.

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• SummerSnow11 member

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  I just finished this chapter - bring on the next! I must know what happens.

  
  

             

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  I READ IT OKAY?

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• BoopADoopBetty member

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  It was scary. I NEEDED COMFORTING. I told you about my fear of the skinless guy creeping up on me while I slept. THIS IS WORSE

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  My "omg wtf"s are about feels, not scaries. I'm digging the main timeline, bit time.
  
  

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  I'm the only one scared. DONT MAKE FUN OF ME

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  SookieFrackhouse68 said:

  Monkeybabe said:

  My "omg wtf"s are about feels, not scaries. I'm digging the main timeline, bit time.
  
  

  Which feels would those be? Do expound.

  
  

  I have so many feels about this chapter.

  The content of the intro made me super sad, and Micah's questioning broke my heart. Like, could you imagine being a toddler and not really understanding what's going on? Fuck, man. Also, the older boys and their sorrow and rage and it just really tugs at the heart.

  
  

  In the main story line, I was just like, whoa, fucking scary and I want to know what those things are, because they sound cool. The religious aspect of the other people brings about a lot of questions that I'm assuming will be answered later, or perhaps it's just that apocalypse breaks people's minds?

  
  

  Unrelated to feels, the Ian/tears/shoe part felt slightly repetitive to me, and my brain tripped over it a little, though that's probably just me.  

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• rainyday3187 member

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  I loved this chapter, you have a great talent! I always look forward to you posting your work. Sometimes it is the best part of my day.

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• BoopADoopBetty member

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  SookieFrackhouse68 said:

  I'm the only one scared. DONT MAKE FUN OF ME

  TOO LATE

  
  We'll see if I give you anymore chemistry pickup lines

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• LuckyDad member

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  Poor Micah.
  
  I need to go to the shooting range with my buddy and get better with a handgun.
  
  The digs at Liberty University were pretty funny.
  

  

  -My son was born in April 2012. He pretty much rules.
  

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