Bday invite pip

Re: Bday invite pip

• Doodle2011

  December 2011

  Cute, but I would change the main font color to black with the exceptions of the "Jay Street" and the bottom sentence.  And maybe the Please Join Us  To Celebrate block.  All that green is running together to me.  Also, for the opening, how about just a simple:

  Come and play, Jay's turning ONE today!

   

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  I will butt out now.  ;-)

   

   

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• jcole32444

  December 2011

  Doodle2011:

  Cute, but I would change the main font color to black with the exceptions of the "Jay Street" and the bottom sentence.  And maybe the Please Join Us  To Celebrate block.  All that green is running together to me.  Also, for the opening, how about just a simple:

  Come and play, Jay's turning ONE today!

   

  ?

  I will butt out now.  ;-)

   

   

  Thanks. Ill try it!

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• MarSamWhitney member

  December 2011

  Maybe make the writing blue or red, a more dominant color? I dunno, because it could look just fine when its printed. I think its super cute, I especially love the last line!! You did a good job!

  
  
  

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• RouensDream member

  December 2011

  Super cute!
  

  
  
  
  

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• CaniacMom member

  December 2011

  Love it - It is super cute & creative...

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• RedZee member

  December 2011

  I agree with Doodle - it's really cute!

       
  

  
  
  

  DD1: born 1/19/11. DD2: born 10/10/13
  

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