NBR Any creative ladies out there? words that rhyme with falling?

ajf2004 · November 2008

I am creating a label for a bottle of wine for a bride and groom. My theme is ? a bottle to share on a cold winter night?

I want to put a poem on the back label ?

So far I have:

When it?s cold outside and the snow is falling

Sitting with your love one is all that is calling

Open this bottle and have a drink or two

And nothing else should matter but the two of you

But I really don?t like the second line- and I can?t think of any other good words that rhyme with falling?

I an open to all suggestions?

Any creative ladies out there that can help?

thank you!!!

Amymarie13 · November 2008

mauling? haha, jk. "dahling" like darling? stalling. that's a hard one

lar1203 · November 2008

enthralling

*Bre* · November 2008

i think "have a drink or two" sounds like they should drink it out of the bottle haha, maybe "have a glass or two"? And for the rhymes....try rhymezone.com or maybe come up with a different rhyme pattern, like instead of AA BB try ABAB or ABBA

milfy1 · November 2008

the cheesiness here is appalling.

ajf2004 · November 2008

LOL... good point Bre... I didn't even think of it like that

ajf2004 · November 2008

milfy- do you have any suggestions to make it less cheesy lol?

milfy1 · November 2008

I am just giving you a hard time. I work in the wine business and I think these specialty labels are sometimes not done quite right. Do you have to do a rhyme-ey poem? Or could you do a quote or just a sentiment that reflects something about the bride and groom perhaps?

ajf2004 · November 2008

Milfy-

No I don't have to do a rhyme-ey poem... I just thought that would be a bit nicer then just saying "love allison"

I don't know anything about the groom so it would be hard to say something nice about the bride and groom. It is for my cousin's wedding and the entire bridal party has to create a label.

Do you have any suggestions to what you mentioned above?

milfy1 · November 2008

ajf2004:

Milfy-

No I don't have to do a rhyme-ey poem... I just thought that would be a bit nicer then just saying "love allison"

I don't know anything about the groom so it would be hard to say something nice about the bride and groom. It is for my cousin's wedding and the entire bridal party has to create a label.

Do you have any suggestions to what you mentioned above?

google poetry.com. I can't remember the exact site. You can search for quotes and things on there. Or you could ask the bride if they have a song or something.

ajf2004 · November 2008

thanks for your help!

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