WDYT of these invites?

Mrs.JDD

This is with the sample text...my name is not Susan Hayward   Also, I'm having trouble with the wording...so I made it say:

Please join us in celebrating the upcoming wedding of

Bride and Groom

 

WDYT?

oparcm

NMS, it is a bit busy.

sarahbear

Is this an engagement party? If so, I'd word it "Please join us in celebrating the engagement of X & Y." I think the invitation looks festive.

Mrs.JDD

It's for a couple's shower, and they want a beach theme since they are having a beach wedding.  I just emailed them to my friend and she loved them, so they are being ordered very soon!