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What do you think of this invite? PIP

sourpatchkidssourpatchkids member
in May 2013 Moms
I made this invite, but every time I make something I think it looks bad...and can't tell if it really looks bad or if it's fine.

WDYT? Anything I should change?

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Brady (7.15.10) and Nolan (5.11.13)
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Re: What do you think of this invite? PIP

  • SaguaroBlossmomSaguaroBlossmom member
    It's cute! Maybe add an exclamation point somewhere ? But then again I'm an punctuation whore..
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  • bumpuser3155624bumpuser3155624 member
    I like it too. I think you did a good job!
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  • CNJ4EVACNJ4EVA member
    Looks great! Nice job!
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  • sourpatchkidssourpatchkids member
    Thanks girls!

    Do you think the "please stop on by" could be replaced with a better phrase? Maybe "come celebrate" or something more along the lines of what Mickey says? Any ideas?
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  • telicious2telicious2 member
    Good job!

    Maybe "Come celebrate with us!"
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  • Shoegal36Shoegal36 member
    "Mousy on over" Ha, I'm kidding...I like "come celebrate."

    Really cute invitation. Good job!
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  • smg2302smg2302 member
    Adorable.  Place for RSVP info?

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  • MauLoaM0MMauLoaM0M member
    It looks great!!!

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  • aintnoyuppiemomaintnoyuppiemom member

    I love it! I especially love the mickey lane in goofytown. Is that an actual place? because that is adorable. I also love the meska mooska mickey mouse only but maybe its bc my LO is watching mickey right now.

    I think everything looks very good together. If you don't like it though maybe you could put different pics then just the mickey shape (Like have a different card for everyone, I guess it depends on where your making them)? Or put a pic of the clubhouse on the invite with a sign that says Nolans Clubhouse. But I like it the way it is, just some suggestions if you want to change it anyway.

     

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  • sourpatchkidssourpatchkids member
    Thanks everyone! No, it's not an actual place :) Would be cute if it was, though!

    I am going to see how "come celebrate with us" looks. Thanks for the suggestion!
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