Opinions/AW/sort of SPAM

SallySunrise

I guess this is spam, but y'all aren't local so I'm not soliciting your business, so it's kind of not...  Anyway.  Hope it's ok that I link my website!  Many of you are on my fb page (which I am so thankful for!) but for those who aren't, I thought I'd share it here.  I'm also wondering if anyone sees any mistakes or anything you think I should change?  All I'm getting on fb are friendly "go you!" and "looks great!" comments, which I'm not complaining about, but I'd love a good critique too!  TIA  

https://www.lifeslightmamas.com

lewispm

I wish I had some constructive criticism, but I wouldn't change a thing! Honestly, if you were local, I would totally want you by my side for my next labor (lord (and husband) willing I ever get to have another). In fact, I really, really wish you were local so I could have just that!

It really does look great!

StokedWifey

I just read almost every word and I have to join the FB people.  I like it.  You were informative, but also very down-to-earth.  I read it like you were saying it directly to me.  Can you come to AL if I have another kiddo?

The only thing that tripped me up was how I read "They have blessed me and my clients by sharing their wisdom, and given me all the tools I need...." I know you said have earlier in the sentence, but I keep reading it before "given" also.  

I love the family picture!

KarmB

FLAG!!!!!

I like it but agree with stokey

SallySunrise

Thank you ladies!  @stokedwifey, ok now I'm confused by your wording!  LOL!  Are you just saying I need to add the word "have" before the word "given"?

StokedWifey

Yes ma'am.  At least that's how it's flowing in my head.

SallySunrise

StokedWifey said:

Yes ma'am.  At least that's how it's flowing in my head.

 Ok, thank you!  I appreciate it!  And to you and @lewispm, I would be so honored to be your doula!  I wish I had a million airline points so I could just fly all over and be the official doula for any J12 mom who wants me.  

OkieMama

I'm with @lewispm! OK is not very far

SallySunrise

@okiemama I have free lodging in Tulsa, so...

OkieMama

@sallysunrise I'm closer to Moore...

SallySunrise

@mightybee it's been going great! The doula that did all my training classes and therefore knows a whole bunch of local doulas has been calling me as her back-up! She gets a TON of clients so she ends up needing help quite a bit. It's been wonderful experience, and I'm so tickled that she chooses to use me over all the doulas she has worked with over the years! I just booked another client all on my own for March: a hopeful VBAC mama! I am SUPER excited/anxious about that! Glad I have some time to do a whole bunch of reading. Thanks for asking!