Last one... critique...

pincushion

Okay I think this is the final version...whatcha think???

ANYONE see anything I should fix prior to sending them for printing?? I always screw up somewhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*I edited this one to not have my phone # but the one being sent has it.

 

katie277s

I think that is so cute!!  Very nice

amanda&rob

Love it!  Miles is so handsome.

j-w

Looks good to me!

amiamish

I think it's cute

My only *suggestion*---the wording

"Oh how fun it will be

to see Miles turn THREE!"

bride505

I think it's adorable. However maybe I am missing something, but I don't see a date for the actual party, only an RSVP date...

amiamish

bride505:

I think it's adorable. However maybe I am missing something, but I don't see a date for the actual party, only an RSVP date...

I think that date there in the party date, no RSVP date...

pincushion

thanks...this is why I should never do my own cards!!!

 

thanks.. doing some more work!!

bride505

Ok. I see it.  I think that the way it is may be a little confusing, but could be because her phone number isn't on this version.

It's been a long day at work...can you tell? LOL

happ17

looks great! The only thing I'd do (because I'm an anal retentive editor) is put a comma after "us"

If you can join us, RSVP 

AnnapolisLari

amiamish:

I think it's cute

My only *suggestion*---the wording

"Oh how fun it will be

to see Miles turn THREE!"

I have the same suggestion. I don't like 'would it be' at all.

How much fun it will be to see Miles turn three!

Kelly Madonna

I would change the number 3 to word three, but, other than that, they look great!