WDYT? Trying to be creative - Work Related

PongoLePond · September 2013

It's up to me to come up with the new October Specials that have to be out today and the baby has consumed my brain. I have two done but my boss has shot down my last three ideas for the 3rd and thankfully last special. I wanted to get some opinions BEFORE I sent her another one. I like this part of my job and don't want her to think I can't handle it so I'd like some opinions from completely non-biased ladies! I know it needs a grammar check but you get the general idea.

Pumpkins and spice and everything nice ~ Relax and treat yourself with a pumpkin foot scrub followed by a spice body wrap and finished with a 40 minute Swedish massage for the perfect fall "pamper-me" treatment.

Edited for wording.