Brava! Like the Godfather Part II, somehow this work surpassed the brilliance of the original. I can only imagine the third part will be just like the Godfather III.
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... Oh yeah. Sorry about that.
Let's go with Star Wars. Empire is better than A New Hope, right? And Return of the Jedi is even better... Aw hell!
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RETURN OF THE KING! Forgettable in places but a satisfying conclusion to an epic tale!
-My son was born in April 2012. He pretty much rules.
Dammit, Sookie, thanks to making the illustrated version of your story I now know the difference between Liam and Louis. Although is Liam the boring one of the group?
-My son was born in April 2012. He pretty much rules.
Dammit, Sookie, thanks to making the illustrated version of your story I now know the difference between Liam and Louis. Although is Liam the boring one of the group?
He is when he's dating someone. Now that he's single he's been thrusting, drinking, and working out shirtless more. The questionable one is Zayn because he keeps to himself and hides away.
"I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."
Do you think I could assign this as required reading to the students the first week of school. Also if you are looking for volunteers to have a wild chocolate and whipped cream filed rendezvous with Zayn in any of your future chapters just keep me in mind as I am still trying to work out my new found feelings for him.
TTC since June 2009 01/10- Femara 03/10- Femara 07/2010- Clomid with injectables and IUI #1 08/2010- IUI #2 06/2011- IVF #1 BFP! 09/2011- Miscarriage at 10 1/2 weeks 11/2011- FET 01/2012- Start Home Study process 03/2012- Home Study approved and now waiting on our child to find us! 07/2012- matched with a BM who is due in October! 11/10/12- our son is born! 11/13/12- court grants us custody! 12/28/12- finalization! Always ours in our hearts, but.now also ours forever
I tried reading the first few sentences of chapter one and ended up snorting while attempting to stifle my laughter. I'm going to have to save your incredible story until I get home so I can enjoy it without any coworkers giving me the stink eye.
It ruins the manly image I have of him in my mind's eye.
What about my visual representation?
For the record, I don't think Louis would ever wear yellow pants. They looked more beige on my other computer screen. But look at those soulless, angry yet beautiful blue eyes?
-My son was born in April 2012. He pretty much rules.
Re: Light: A Harry Styles Fauxfic, Chapter Two
Also, what does sinewy even mean??
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... Oh yeah. Sorry about that.
Let's go with Star Wars. Empire is better than A New Hope, right? And Return of the Jedi is even better... Aw hell!
....
RETURN OF THE KING! Forgettable in places but a satisfying conclusion to an epic tale!
So far my fave line:
"His long fingers wriggled into the back pocket of my jeans and I soon realised he wasn't searching for my phone."
Should I use "just looking for your phone, poppet" next time I want to get gropey?
"I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."
"I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."
Dammit, Sookie, thanks to making the illustrated version of your story I now know the difference between Liam and Louis. Although is Liam the boring one of the group?
"I stammered, unable to form a coherent thought because I have a vagina."
TTC since June 2009
01/10- Femara
03/10- Femara
07/2010- Clomid with injectables and IUI #1
08/2010- IUI #2
06/2011- IVF #1 BFP!
09/2011- Miscarriage at 10 1/2 weeks
11/2011- FET
01/2012- Start Home Study process
03/2012- Home Study approved and now waiting on our child to find us!
07/2012- matched with a BM who is due in October!
11/10/12- our son is born!
11/13/12- court grants us custody!
12/28/12- finalization! Always ours in our hearts, but.now also ours forever
http://keepingupwiththejoneses-dana.blogspot.com/
What about my visual representation?
For the record, I don't think Louis would ever wear yellow pants. They looked more beige on my other computer screen. But look at those soulless, angry yet beautiful blue eyes?