Opinions please- poem for father's day

Stewartandmaura · June 2013

I wrote this to put on the mat of a picture of E and her daddy.

Daddy, I am small but I am growing every day.

I wish I had a way to tell you what I want to say.

Each little hug, each little laugh, the little kisses too

Are little things that I can do to show my love for you.

I love our special story times and moments that we share

And all the other little things that show me that you care.

Just remember, as I grow, and things change in my world.

Big or small, I?ll always be my Daddy?s Little Girl.

Is it too cheesy? Does it flow? Come on poetry critics, give it to me.

jwls84 · June 2013

I like it, father daughter stuff always gets me... I personally don't think it is cheesy. I couldn't write a poem to save my life so I am impressed.

missyishere · June 2013

Remove the word that from the poem, and see if that sounds better.

It's very sweet. I'm sure he'll love it!

Deez10 · June 2013

That's very sweet!

morsey2011 · June 2013

jwls84:
I like it, father daughter stuff always gets me... I personally don't think it is cheesy. I couldn't write a poem to save my life so I am impressed.

This. I copied my poem from the Internet.

lisamonkee11 · June 2013

Awww so sweet!

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