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I need some help ladies

tandb2010tandb2010 member
in August 2011 Moms

I am making 10% off coupons for my pampered chef buisness and I want to put a cute little rhyme on them, but the create poem section of my brain has seem to shut down. 

Pampered Chef is a cooking and kitchen ware direct selling business of those of you that don't know.

TIA

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Re: I need some help ladies

  • tandb2010tandb2010 member

    This is what I came up with.  What do you think? 

    This coupon is a gift from me to you

    It will allow your kitchen to heat up too

    What free product will you choose

    To keep your kitchen running smooth

    Stoneware, Bakeware, and Bamboo

    You?ll love the product as much as I do

     

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    I would just not use a poem. Those little poems tend to annoy me. I'd be happy there was a coupon for pampered chef - all I'd need is a big old, 10% OFF!!!

    I agree!  

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  • melissa0726melissa0726 member
    The poem is cute, but I agree that people would definitely appreciate just the coupon alone :)
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  • tandb2010tandb2010 member

    Thanks Ladies.  I will have to re-work the layout.  I only thought about the poem because there is a huge empty space in the middle of the template.

    I will work on it.

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  • Monsieur_et_Madame_HaMonsieur_et_Madame_Ha member

    I suck at poetry so bad. Sorry :(

    I do agree though that a big fat "DISCOUNT" splashed  across a coupon will get my attention :D

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