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Need help-NBR

danigirl7181danigirl7181 member
in December 2010 Moms

Hello, I haven't been around lately (not that I was a total regular), but wedding stuff has been keeping me busy.

Lily is good, we tried on her flower girl dress and she looks adorable. She is wearing a little white dress and veil. She's going to be my mini me that day :).

So the day is coming up fast as you can see and I was hoping that you ladies could help me out with my vows. We are doing the traditional vows along with our own. I have them written but hoping you could critique and let me know what you think. There are a few lines that are inside jokes between FI and I, is it okay that some people won't understand? My friend said I need more back ground so everyone will know what we are talking about.  

 

 
Today, my dream becomes a reality because today I marry you.
I knew before I said it that I loved you,
but you made me cry and say those three little words first. 
I stand before you today with a promise of forever. 
I promise to always laugh with you and at you when necessary (which is often), to stay on my side of the bed and never share my covers, 
to always push you toward your dreams, to be your best friend, a loving wife, and a caring mother.
I promise to always be honest, faithful, and supportive to you from this day forward.
I feel so blessed to call you my husband and the loving father of our daughter. 
Thank you for making this dream a reality. 
 
 
What do you think? Do they make sense? Do they flow?
Thank you for your help!!!! 

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Re: Need help-NBR

  • mamaholmes2010mamaholmes2010

    Great Job Mama!! You made me tear up too!

    I agree with Mands-the only poeple your vows have to make sense to are you and your Groom!

     Now bring on the Pics!

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  • jarebearsmomjarebearsmom member
    I agree. Vows come from the heart and it's obvious you put a lot of work into those. Good job! Can't wait for pics!
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  • Cheekers2010Cheekers2010 member
    Totally agree ith the others. Your words are beautiful and you don't need to explain them. Besides, they made perfect sense. Congrats on your upcoming wedding!
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  • lrn327lrn327 member
    I think they sound wonderful and heart-felt.  I agree with the rest of the ladies and they are for you guys, not anyone else, and additional explanation is not necessary and might sound forced.  Nice job and congratulations!!
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  • tabby0521tabby0521
    These are beautiful vows. I think you did a great job. I am so excited for you!
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  • danigirl7181danigirl7181 member
    Thank you ladies, I will definitely share pictures. Does anyone know where I can upload pictures so I can send a link out to people? Our photographer only gives us a CD with the images to print ourselves. 

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