Community› The Bump Local Boards› Northern California Babies
Northern California Babies
New Discussion

Poem for Daddy's day

hersheykisshersheykiss
in Northern California Babies

What do you think about this poem I wrote to have framed with a pic of E & DH?

A Poem for My Daddy

 

Daddy,

 

You are always there when I need you,

And even when I think I don?t.

 

You watch me grow and learn,

And you pick me up when I fall.

 

You love to play with me,

And I love to tickle you.

 

You are my hero,

And I love to hold your hand.

 

Everyone calls me a Daddy?s Girl,

And I know that means I am funny, honest, and cute.

 

I love it when you chase me around the room,

But I also love to snuggle with you.

 

I love to eat breakfast with you every morning,

And you have great style when you pick out my clothes.

 

And when I say, ?No, no, no, I don?t want it!?

I really mean, ?I love you.?

Love,

Emmalee

Report Reply to Post

Re: Poem for Daddy's day

  • alibee09alibee09 member
    Does she really mean "I love you" when she says that? I'd consider changing that line. I personally don't like it when people speak for their children, especially when those kids are verbal (even borderline verbal), so that line rubs me the wrong way.
    Baby Birthday Ticker Ticker
    Baby Birthday Ticker Ticker

    the secret blog

    Report Reply
This discussion has been closed.
Choose Another Board
Search Boards
"
"