Need invite advice, REVISED pics inside

futrkingsley · May 2011

C wants a train party. And I want to use this photo of him for the invite. This was my first design, with the second photo as the back. Is the front too text heavy? And is my RSVP on the back visible enough?

Or should I move the "all aboard date time address" info to the back?

Thanks!

Will add blurred pics in a second to get more feedback.

Lexi & Orion's Mommy · May 2011

i think its a really cute invite, but i would delete this now, since you havent blurred out your address.

soon2Bkranz · May 2011

That is so amazing Sarah I thinks its just perfect. My fav part is that you call it Kingsley station!

mandy0505 · May 2011

super cute but I totally agree, you should blur out your contact info

futrkingsley · May 2011

I planned to delete in a minute, just wanted quick feedback. THanks!

Meritage · May 2011

Boo! It's already gone! I want to see - sounds super cute!!

tri_bride05 · May 2011

Very cute - love it!

rozee_tee · May 2011

Super cute! To make the front look a little less text heavy, you can put "Chugga, Chugga..." up in the top right corner.

Meritage · May 2011

OMG - it's SO cute!! I love it! I don't think it's too text heavy. Looks good to me!

jsugrin · May 2011

So, so super cute.

KellyMRocks · May 2011

Super cute! The only change I would make which would make it less "text heavy" would be removing the text from the train in the first one. What ever it says on the black boxes? I would use clone and healing brush to make the back of the train just all yellow and remove those boxes.

futrkingsley · May 2011

KellyMRocks:
Super cute! The only change I would make which would make it less "text heavy" would be removing the text from the train in the first one. What ever it says on the black boxes? I would use clone and healing brush to make the back of the train just all yellow and remove those boxes.

Great minds think alike Kelly. I tried to do that in picnik since I don't have editing software on my mac other than iphoto and it looks really messy. The yellow of the car is really rough and the tool I used looks smudgy. I wish I were a better editor! I supposed I could wait to order until hubby, who actually is a great editor, could do it. Grr for instant gratification!

Meritage · May 2011

Had to tell you again how cute this is. What a precious picture! We have been invited to a lot of train parties, and this is my favorite train invite BY FAR. Great job!!