Hawaii Babies

tattoo - update and new poll

One of the things a few people voiced concerns about was that the birds seemed kind of romantic vs family/fun, and I totally agree. I changed the direction they were flying and that helped, but when I was looking at the design today it occurred to me that maybe it reads as romantic because of the *type* of birds (swallows). So I did a little searching and tweaking and came up with the following design:

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What do you think? I wanted something that wouldn't be interpreted as romantic, but that also wasn't too cartoony (my sons are children but it's going to be on my body, kwim?).

After experimenting, decided I still wanted both birds in flight (vs one flying, one standing as someone suggested) - does it work to have these birds facing each other? They can be flipped, but they just fit together better this way - but if they still read as lovebirds I'll flip one of them.

Here's the original for comparison:

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Re: tattoo - update and new poll

  • Love this!  When are you gonna do it?  Will you go with black or some other color? You've made me consider getting another tat...maybe a little bee since I call Libby "Lizzy B my Busy Bee..."  I'll probably wait until we have the next kiddo though so I can get both memorialized in art.
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  • imageMarried2MrWright:
    Love this!  When are you gonna do it?  Will you go with black or some other color? You've made me consider getting another tat...maybe a little bee since I call Libby "Lizzy B my Busy Bee..."  I'll probably wait until we have the next kiddo though so I can get both memorialized in art.

    I'll get it done sometime before I go back to work - so probably next month. A friend and I are going to make a special trip to Sydney (she has a few tats and wants another to symbolize her daughter) because the artists are a lot better there. 

    A bee would be so cute! You could always get one now (or whenever) and leave space for something else - or do you want one thing that would memorialize both of them?

  • love the new design :)
  • I voted for the new one! I like the birds themselves better and even though they're facing each other, they don't look romantic at all. They look playful and the design looks really nice =)
    Sept 2008 Wedding | May 2010 & Mar 2012 Babies
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