some googling and brainstorming - opinions? (wording)

Sunidaze

Congratulations on your retirement MSgt B-----!

 

11/3/1987 ? 7/6/2012

 

We salute and your many years of service!

JuneBugsMommy

Looks good to me, but I think you forgot a word... shouldn't it say We salute you and your many years of service?

Sunidaze

JuneBugsMommy:

Looks good to me, but I think you forgot a word... shouldn't it say We salute you and your many years of service?

Good catch!  THis is what I get for doing too many things all at once!

JuneBugsMommy

Sunidaze:

JuneBugsMommy:

Looks good to me, but I think you forgot a word... shouldn't it say We salute you and your many years of service?

Good catch!  THis is what I get for doing too many things all at once!

I figured it just slipped your mind!

sunshine336

Sounds good to me too!

JavaVino910

I like the wording, but I wonder if it's too long? Not sure what size cake you are getting, but it seems like a lot to include on the cake.

Sunidaze

JavaVino910:

I like the wording, but I wonder if it's too long? Not sure what size cake you are getting, but it seems like a lot to include on the cake.

The cake itself will serve 60...I think (hope) she will be able to fit it all!